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Patricia M. DŽAngelo

"Dream Weaver" by Patricia M. DŽAngelo

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This story was inspired by a beautiful painting done by William P. Jones called Star Fisher. I commented, that such a wonderful picture deserved a story. William quite graciously allowed me to write the story. I am honored and hope my words as elegant as his beautiful drawing. His picture can be found here. Star Fisher

Took care of the first sentence -- Thanks again, Chris!!!!!

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Dream Weaver

 

By Trish D"Angelo

 

 

Dream Weaver gazed down upon the quaint little fishing village, watching as night’s deep blanket stretched across thatched roofs. Thoughts of beauty, kindness, sincerity, and love filled her… and she dreamed. Gathering all goodness and gentleness of the earth in a swirling, ethereal vapor, she wove her imaginings. At her release, they burst upon the dark heavens in all their sparkling glory… dream stars.

With the greatest care, she wove one more star, the same star she created every night, it’s luminance and splendor far greater than all the others. This dream spoke of her love for the Star Fisher.

Each night he came, plodding up the steep cliff, fishing pole in hand. He looked to the twinkling veil and found her face, serene and beautiful. Blessed he was, for only the eyes of a Star Fisher were destined to catch a glimpse of the astonishing creature.

He cast his line, pulling down shimmering stars for each inhabitant of his village. He dropped the glittering dreams into a simple reed basket, for the vessel mattered not. Even a bowl of hammered gold would not be worthy of the precious gifts.

On the final cast, his deep sigh caught up and mingled with the soft breeze that swept down the mountainside. He was reluctant to turn his eyes away. Yet he knew the villagers waited for his basket of dreams… mighty dreams… dreams to dispel the wandering nightmares that crouched on the outskirts of evening.

The walk down the mountainside always seemed to take longer, but he faithfully made the rounds to the quiet, simple  homes of the fishermen and their families. There was but one star left, and it shone brilliantly.

He clutched the treasure tightly, making the way to his humble abode… and then to his bedroom. Kneeling beside his cot, he slowly pulled a large wooden box from beneath its hiding place. Throwing open the chest, thousands of points of light split the darkness of his small room. Dreams undreamt beckoned, vibrating with their desires, begging to find fulfillment.

He knew of Dream Weaver’s love for him, but he was the only Star Fisher left in the region. The village could not do without him.

He placed a gentle kiss on the dream star, and with trembling fingers laid it atop the others. Ever so slowly he lowered the lid, a small tear slipping past his cheek. This night, as every night, he closed his heart to his dreams.

 

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3 Jun 2008:-) Chris A Jackson
Scimitar Moon is probably going to a small press... I met a very interesting publisher at a convention, and we hit it off... she really knows what she is doing and is already publishing several authors that I know. It may be out by the end of the year, but we’ve got a lot of work to do... The editing is done. It’s now 140K words down from 166K. Ouch... that hurt.

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I’m sure it’s like cutting off an arm. I can’t wait to get my hands on a copy. *Rubs hands together, gleefully* I can be your first sale. Though, I’ll want a signed copy."
11 Jun 2008:-) Helle Jorgensen
It’s very intriguing to se the combination of story and picture. Sad and poetic. I can’t help wondering whether the nightmares, too, might not merit a story one day?

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "That’s a good idea, I’ll have to give it some thought. First I’ll have to figure out where the nightmares come from."
25 Jul 2008:-) Dave Cripps
If he dreamt them would he die? To join the Dream Weaver in his sleep? But then who would catch the dreams for the other villagers? Quite a sad little tale.

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I don’t think of it as death, but yes, I do imagine if he used his dream star, he would join her. The only reason he doesn’t is his sense of duty to his village. The idea of sacrificing self interest for the interest of others. It might be sad, but also noble."
6 Sep 2008:-) Sarah-amy haley
*sniff* beautiful, and sad, for both of them. A lovely piece. Perfect tone...

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I really enjoyed writing this one. I wouldn’t have been able to come up with the story if it hadn’t been for the wonderful inspiration pictue by William P. Jones. His picture just invited a story."
16 Sep 200845 Donna
your story fits William P. Jones Picture perfectly. Very nice!

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "Thank you very much. Comments like these are what keep me writing."
9 Oct 2008:-) Ian Plumb
This piece is really quite beautiful. I like stories that describe service to others as a noble, generous act. This one was quite uplifting. An excellent tale!

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I’m happy with this tale. I don’t know if you spotted the link in the description. It’s to a drawing that sparked the idea. The author was kind enough to let me write a tale using the drawing for inspiration."
2 Nov 2008:-) Katherine Deros
Well, you were right. I really like this short story. And it fits so well with William’s picture. Beautiful work!

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "Thank you very much. I really enjoyed writing this one."
7 Nov 2008:-) Rachel Elizabeth lowe
you asked me to read this short story and i think its brilliant it’s a really calming but a very nic tale to read.

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I’m glad you enjoyed the tale."
25 Feb 2009:-) Sam Adams
Awww that’s so beautiful and kinda sad too. It’s a wonderful image of what dreams are, if only he had some spare for me!

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "I really enjoyed this story especially because it sprang from a picture found here at Elfwood. ( http://www.elfwood.com/art/l/i/littlebilly/starfishing.jpg.ht- - ml ) William P. Jones was nice enough to invite me to write the tale to go along with his painting."
8 Apr 2009:-) Kelsey M. Graham
Random Speculation: I wonder... Is this the inverse of Nightmara’s Cast? They seem to go together (dealing with dreams, weaving them from people’s actions and thoughts)
So sad... I love how you described everything. *goes off to look at the picture*

:-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo replies: "You are correct. I wrote this story first, and Helle Jorgensen commented that nightmares might deserve their own story. That triggered the idea, for Nightmare’s cast.
This is my favorite of the two. I hope you found the picture, because it is an inspiration. I was thrilled he let me write the tale."
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About 'Dream Weaver':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Patricia M. DŽAngelo
 • Copyright: ©Patricia M. DŽAngelo. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Star fisher, Dream weaver, Dream stars
 • Categories: Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Romance, Emotion, Love
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